Hani’s Habit

As promised, here is a creatively written post. I did write this yesterday, but my internet was down. I'm going to get better about writing every weekday! Hani is a character in the book I’m currently working on. She is about 15 years old and the quintessential ditsy barmaid. I love her and wish she could be more involved in the book. Maybe I’ll have some more flashback type stories with her… Anyway, without further ado, here is Hani talking about her hard to break habit (I doubt she has ever learned to read, or cared to spend the time learning):
            People’ve told me I talk too much. I think they’re just upset that I know their secrets and am not afraid to call them out on it. I remember this one time when I saw Kwan, the delivery man, with Trina, another barmaid, in the kitchen. If they really didn’t want anybody to see them snogging, they would have gone somewhere more private.
            Anyway, I can’t understand why Kwan would want to snog Trina anyway. Sure, she’s easy, if that’s all he was looking for. She’s not that much to get though. Her hair’s an ugly mud shade, her eyes are dull, and her whole face is plain. She has no idea how to dress either. She’s just a boring flirt.
            I guess Kwan isn’t too much to look at either though. Ugh. He’s not tall at all, and his nose was broken a couple of years ago when he tried to break up a bar fight so it’s all crooked. I guess he does have decent muscles from lifting the heavy boxes. Yeah, I suppose if I were judging only by body he’d be okay. His skin is a nice tan shade…
            What was I talking about? Oh, right. People just don’t like to be called out on what they do. If they don’t want people to know about it, they should just not do it.